Talent Entries-Discussion
- American Eagle
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Shall we continue without IDJ? And she can post her thoughts when she can? We are running out of days...
he/him | attorney | spartan | christian | bleeding heart type
Note: My past posts do not necessarily reflect my values. Many of them were made when I was young and (in retrospect) misguided. If you identify a post that expresses misinformation, prejudice, or anything harmful, please let me know.
Note: My past posts do not necessarily reflect my values. Many of them were made when I was young and (in retrospect) misguided. If you identify a post that expresses misinformation, prejudice, or anything harmful, please let me know.
We can if you want, or if you want to try waiting one more day you and her can find a time you are sure you will be on tomorrow afternoon or Wednesday morning/early afternoon and I will be able to make it.
- American Eagle
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The only time that I could do it is like... after 1am.bookworm wrote:you are sure you will be on tomorrow afternoon or Wednesday morning/early afternoon and I will be able to make it.
LET'S GO. IDJ, join when you can.
DAWG, DAWG DAWG, I HATE TAKING LIKE THIS. It’s over... I am now going post my thoughts through meme images.Entry 3: Story
Entry 3: Story
he/him | attorney | spartan | christian | bleeding heart type
Note: My past posts do not necessarily reflect my values. Many of them were made when I was young and (in retrospect) misguided. If you identify a post that expresses misinformation, prejudice, or anything harmful, please let me know.
Note: My past posts do not necessarily reflect my values. Many of them were made when I was young and (in retrospect) misguided. If you identify a post that expresses misinformation, prejudice, or anything harmful, please let me know.
A miserable piece of writing. Multiple grammar errors, and the story doesn’t make sense. There’s no fulfillment of the ambiguous comment at the end. I have never read such a disjoined jumble of words.Entry 3: Story
* The above post was made in character and does not necessarily represent the views of bookworm. No offense meant.
- American Eagle
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Entry 4: Music Video
he/him | attorney | spartan | christian | bleeding heart type
Note: My past posts do not necessarily reflect my values. Many of them were made when I was young and (in retrospect) misguided. If you identify a post that expresses misinformation, prejudice, or anything harmful, please let me know.
Note: My past posts do not necessarily reflect my values. Many of them were made when I was young and (in retrospect) misguided. If you identify a post that expresses misinformation, prejudice, or anything harmful, please let me know.
Bad lighting and bad sound quality! Watching that strained my eyes and ears! And you were backing yourself up with some kind of drum track, clearly an attempt to make you sound better.Entry 4: Music Video
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- American Eagle
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Entry 5: Photography (titled Sprinkles)
This image was rather lame.
he/him | attorney | spartan | christian | bleeding heart type
Note: My past posts do not necessarily reflect my values. Many of them were made when I was young and (in retrospect) misguided. If you identify a post that expresses misinformation, prejudice, or anything harmful, please let me know.
Note: My past posts do not necessarily reflect my values. Many of them were made when I was young and (in retrospect) misguided. If you identify a post that expresses misinformation, prejudice, or anything harmful, please let me know.
I almost liked this one at first glance, I have a soft spot for rats, but upon closer review this is just as bad as the rest. What on earth was the photographer thinking? Rats in a teapot? Disgusting!Entry 5: Photography (titled Sprinkles)
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- American Eagle
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I think it was a milk pot.
Entry 6: Music Video
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Note: My past posts do not necessarily reflect my values. Many of them were made when I was young and (in retrospect) misguided. If you identify a post that expresses misinformation, prejudice, or anything harmful, please let me know.
Note: My past posts do not necessarily reflect my values. Many of them were made when I was young and (in retrospect) misguided. If you identify a post that expresses misinformation, prejudice, or anything harmful, please let me know.
- Musical Shutterbug
- Film Score Addict
- Posts: 7623
- Joined: February 2010
Sorry about the delay guys, I've had to take care of my real life
Here are most of mine...I can't be online for the next four or five days, so I shall post the remaining ones tomorrow
A magic trick is very unique...I applaud you for that
Your hand goes off of the screen one time...it gives the impression that you might have thrown the cloth aside or something like that
Beyond that, the only other thing that I can say is that you should paint your fingernails
Wow. Oh, wow. That was amazing. Superb. Excellent. Astonishing. Mind blowing It was so good that I cannot think of any more words to describe it And I love your piano because it looks freshly wiped. So clean that we could see the reflection of your hands playing
I also enjoyed the way that you added small hand flourishes here and there. This made it much more entertaining to watch
Another great song selection as well!
I will be posting my other reviews tomorrow morning.
Here are most of mine...I can't be online for the next four or five days, so I shall post the remaining ones tomorrow
Love the green backgroundEntry 2: Video
A magic trick is very unique...I applaud you for that
Your hand goes off of the screen one time...it gives the impression that you might have thrown the cloth aside or something like that
Beyond that, the only other thing that I can say is that you should paint your fingernails
I laughed at the end, it was truly amusing I noted several grammatical and punctuation errors, but the story was quite clever.Entry 3: Story
One of my favorite songs The lighting was kind of dim...and I think that the separate track playing distracted from your own excellent piano work. Speaking as a previous piano player, I compliment you on your beautiful hand posture throughout the entire songEntry 4: Music Video
Out of mere curiosity, is that a personal pet? He/she is irresistibly adorable Lovely camera work. An excellent series of photographs. I can only hope that the teapot was empty when you took these picturesEntry 5: Photography (titled Sprinkles)
I just noted while scrolling through the entries that there are a lot of videos in this talent contest Minor note...Entry 6: Music Video
Wow. Oh, wow. That was amazing. Superb. Excellent. Astonishing. Mind blowing It was so good that I cannot think of any more words to describe it And I love your piano because it looks freshly wiped. So clean that we could see the reflection of your hands playing
I also enjoyed the way that you added small hand flourishes here and there. This made it much more entertaining to watch
Another great song selection as well!
You have a lovely voice That was an excellent song choice for you. Quite beautiful I was impressed. And your guitar playing was well done. It is easy to see that a lot of work went into this.Entry 7: Music Video
I will be posting my other reviews tomorrow morning.
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- American Eagle
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bookworm, when you get online, maybe you could review #7, but also post #8 and #9?
he/him | attorney | spartan | christian | bleeding heart type
Note: My past posts do not necessarily reflect my values. Many of them were made when I was young and (in retrospect) misguided. If you identify a post that expresses misinformation, prejudice, or anything harmful, please let me know.
Note: My past posts do not necessarily reflect my values. Many of them were made when I was young and (in retrospect) misguided. If you identify a post that expresses misinformation, prejudice, or anything harmful, please let me know.
Playing a piano in socks? Terribly unclassy. You should be wearing dress shoes! And on that note you should be in a suit, or at least something more dignified than a T-shirt! And I think I heard one wrong note.Entry 6: Music Video
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- Musical Shutterbug
- Film Score Addict
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- Joined: February 2010
Can't wait to see who wins this.
Well done I really enjoyed this. A poem about poems and poetsEntry 8: Poetry
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Terrible acoustics. The guitar was overpowering your voice. And why were you wearing green? I hate green.Entry 7: Music Video
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- Musical Shutterbug
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You are a mean judge Very critical.
Extremely creative piece of work. The shadows in the box, the colors, it looks so real. This is a fabulous entryEntry 9: Creative Photography
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Ugh, I detest poetry. Not all of it, but much of it. I was really hoping no one would enter a poem in this contest, but I had a feeling at least one person would. Poems like this are physically painful for me to read, but I forced myself to get through it so I could make my review. All I have to say is the second verse is spot on, you certainly don’t want to eat poetry. Especially poetry like this, it would make you sick.Entry 8: Poetry
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- Musical Shutterbug
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A homemade music video in a trailer Looks really crowded in there. My only complaint would be that the lead singer's lips aren't matching with the words that are playing This makes the video seem kind of fake...Entry 10: Music Video
...but otherwise, I was greatly amused. All of the musicians were so full out
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I am at a complete loss in understanding this image. If that guy can magically pop out of boxes wherever he wants, why would he decide to use that ability to play a piano? Ridiculous.Entry 9: Creative Photography
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- Musical Shutterbug
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Can't wait to see AE's thoughts on this entryEntry 11: Video/Photoshopping
I like the background music. That was a clever way to illustrate a moral that is taught in the Bible
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Your voice was too quiet, I couldn’t hear most of what you said. But what I could hear wasn’t great anyway, lots of mumbling and faltering punctuated by random vocalizations. And your ‘talent’ is illegal anyway. Redubbing a music video is copyright infringement. Your entry shouldn’t have even been allowed in this contest!Entry 10: Music Video
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