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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 8:22 pm 
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So, this is quite possibly the worst piece of poetry I've ever written. :anxious: But, alas, I threw it together. It's a limerick (well, sort of), which are generally very light and humorous but, this one's unique. :)

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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 9:55 pm 
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I spent awhile pouring over the phrase "Her death: an angelic heist." That concept intrigues me.

Thanks for writing this, KBT, and nicely done.

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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2011 10:44 pm 
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Very nicely done...no idea how that could be considered a bad piece of poetry...very intriguing, thought-provoking, and fitting.

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