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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 8:27 am 
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I wrote this poem last night, and I thought I would share it with the world. I haven't written a a long time. Mostly due to busyness, a little laziness, and a writer's block. :anxious: Anyway, it felt good to write again. You can view the poem by clicking the link below. Feel free to leave a review on here or FictionPress. Constructive criticism is always helpful. (Compliments are great too. ;)) Either way, thank you for taking the time to read it.

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3043217/1/The_Funny_Thing_About_Love

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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 11:22 am 
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Wow, I like it! Keep On writing!

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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 12:18 pm 
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Thank you so much, Honey Wheeler! :)

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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 11:22 pm 
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I appreciated how you used such a variety of describing words that could all be applied to that one bigger theme of love. :D Was there something special that made you want to write this?

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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 5:51 am 
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Han Solo wrote:
I appreciated how you used such a variety of describing words that could all be applied to that one bigger theme of love. :D Was there something special that made you want to write this?


Thank you, Catspaw. I sorry, Han Solo. ;) I was just listening to a bunch of love songs the other day. I began to think how so many people are blind when they are "in love." By the time they realize something is wrong, their hearts have already been broken, but they sometimes still pine for that "love." Then I thought about some people who have the love of their life and everything is perfect. Then someone claims to that they are "bored" or the relationship and break things off. So, that is how the inspiration began.

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