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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 9:03 am 
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The Dance
by Honey Wheeler

Stepping onto the dance floor, we placed our hands in each other’s. Our eyes met and smiles crept across our faces. The music started with a slow gentle waltz. The one, two, three of the music directed our feet as we danced as fluently as if we were speaking. Twirling and gliding, we danced together, enjoying ourselves and caring nothing about the other couples on the dance floor.
The gentle waltz changed to an up beet swing dance. We stepped, tapped, slid, twirled and glided to the fast paced music. Laughing, we slowed our pace to the rhythm of the Charleston. We kicked, spun, and glided some more.
Finally the ending waltz began. We gently and sweetly held each other’s hands for the second and last waltz of the night. Our smiles infectious with laughter in out eyes. Sadly, the dance ended. We did not want to leave. Dance was our love.

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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 9:53 am 
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I really liked this! It was very sweet and well written.

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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2012 5:56 pm 
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Thanks Mulan!!

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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 11:59 pm 
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Very nice! I liked it :)

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