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 Post Post subject: Re: Fallout
Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2012 10:35 am 
I'll catch up to Bren!
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That was good!

Though you called Nadira Noor in a few spots. You might want to fix that. ;)

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Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2012 12:02 pm 
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#-o Can't believe I did that. Hope it is fixed now.

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Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2012 3:44 pm 
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Yup, I don't see them anymore. :)

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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 11:09 am 
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Just letting you know that I am writing the rest of the story before I post it. Just a few more chapters!

Thanks for the reviews! They have encouraged me to keep writing. :)

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Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 11:58 am 
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Can't wait! \:D/

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Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2013 11:44 pm 
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If you would like to read the rest, it is on fanfiction.net

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Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2013 11:58 am 
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I'm sorry, but that was... inappropriate. Please try to keep that kind of stuff to a minimum. And always remember that this is a message board for a kids' radio show. ;)

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Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2013 4:51 pm 
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Sorry--I probably shouldn't have posted it. My judgment was rather foggy after not having much sleep the night before.

Also, rating on ff.net has been changed to M as well for being a little more graphic in the last few chapters.

Necessary in context of the story, since Gray is basically evil, and as he implied, has killed his conscience a long time ago.

Jason had to have a foe like this in order to take him to his breaking point (because he'd never give in without a huge amount of pressure).

But you're right, it is kind of AU, in that it's not exactly for the target audience. ;)

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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2013 1:57 pm 
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So... when are you going to post the next chapter?

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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2013 5:11 pm 
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EvangelineWalker wrote:
If you would like to read the rest, it is on fanfiction.net

can you link it? I can't find it...

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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2013 6:56 pm 
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Here is the link:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8758487/1/Fallout

-- 09 Jan 2013 05:52 pm --

I have edited the one on fanfiction some...

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