Fallout

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Re: Fallout

Postby Woody » Sun Dec 30, 2012 10:35 am

That was good!

Though you called Nadira Noor in a few spots. You might want to fix that. ;)
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Re: Fallout

Postby EvangelineWalker » Sun Dec 30, 2012 12:02 pm

#-o Can't believe I did that. Hope it is fixed now.
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Re: Fallout

Postby Woody » Sun Dec 30, 2012 3:44 pm

Yup, I don't see them anymore. :)
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Re: Fallout

Postby EvangelineWalker » Thu Jan 03, 2013 11:09 am

Just letting you know that I am writing the rest of the story before I post it. Just a few more chapters!

Thanks for the reviews! They have encouraged me to keep writing. :)
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Re: Fallout

Postby Woody » Thu Jan 03, 2013 11:58 am

Can't wait! \:D/
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Re: Fallout

Postby EvangelineWalker » Fri Jan 04, 2013 11:44 pm

If you would like to read the rest, it is on fanfiction.net
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Re: Fallout

Postby Woody » Sat Jan 05, 2013 11:58 am

I'm sorry, but that was... inappropriate. Please try to keep that kind of stuff to a minimum. And always remember that this is a message board for a kids' radio show. ;)
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Re: Fallout

Postby EvangelineWalker » Sat Jan 05, 2013 4:51 pm

Sorry--I probably shouldn't have posted it. My judgment was rather foggy after not having much sleep the night before.

Also, rating on ff.net has been changed to M as well for being a little more graphic in the last few chapters.

Necessary in context of the story, since Gray is basically evil, and as he implied, has killed his conscience a long time ago.

Jason had to have a foe like this in order to take him to his breaking point (because he'd never give in without a huge amount of pressure).

But you're right, it is kind of AU, in that it's not exactly for the target audience. ;)
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Re: Fallout

Postby Woody » Sun Jan 06, 2013 1:57 pm

So... when are you going to post the next chapter?
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Re: Fallout

Postby Jesus' Princess » Sun Jan 06, 2013 5:11 pm

EvangelineWalker wrote:If you would like to read the rest, it is on fanfiction.net

can you link it? I can't find it...
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Re: Fallout

Postby EvangelineWalker » Sun Jan 06, 2013 6:56 pm

Here is the link:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8758487/1/Fallout

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