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I just discovered this thread and it is AMAZING!! I am loving this story. I would try to contribute some plot ideas, but that would take away the suspense. I can't wait to hear more.
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LOUD, INSANELY DRAMATIC HEAVY METAL OZZY OSBOURNE MUSIC BLARES from the radio.
Okay, now that I've woken you up . . .
We hear a DISTINCTIVE BELL SOUND, and can infer that SOMEONE has ENTERED WHIT'S END.
WHIT: Well, that was some nap. Feels like I've been out for a month . . . Hoo, that was almost as bad as 1997 . . .
JACK: Whit! Whit! You've woken up, too?
WHIT: Of course, you . . . Sorry, Jack. I didn't mean to blow up at you.
JACK: Looks like the anger virus is still in effect.
You have thus been SUBTLY REMINDED.
WHIT: Oh, it looks like everyone else is about to wake up.
CONNIE: Wh-what happened?
WHIT: We've all mysteriously fallen asleep, for some reason.
EUGENE: This is most inexplicable.
CONNIE: And unexpected.
JACK: Well, we're awake now.
WHIT: So we are.
CONNIE: So, Whit, how'd the trial work out?
WHIT: Oh, Whit's End is being closed down.
CONNIE: Closed down?!
EUGENE: As opposed to being closed up?
WHIT: Yes, but with all the confusion, perhaps everyone will have forgotten.
ANGRY MOB: Close down! Close down! Close down! Close down!
JACK: This does not augur well.
CONNIE: It's not good, either.
WHIT: Eugene, lock the doors!
EUGENE: (voice cracking) Right away, sir!
We hear a CHINK sound. The door has LOCKED.
WHIT: That should hold them back.
. . .
CONNIE: So, where were we before we dropped with dizziness?
WHIT: I believe that you were about to tell me something very important.
EUGENE: Yes, but I am having trouble remembering what it was. Something to do with ru -- ru -- ru . . .
JACK: Ku! Ruku!
WHIT: Oh, dear.
CONNIE: Blackgaard's unleashing the Ruku virus through the dimension of lost characters?!
EUGENE: Well, it saves time if you go about setting the plot up that way . . .
WHIT: What should we do?
JACK: Actually, I think I know a course of action. You see, while I was asleep, I was having these strange dreams that --
CONNIE: Who cares?! We have a major problem here!
EUGENE: I believe that we would be wise to defer to Mr. Allen's experience, Ms. Kendall.
CONNIE: Hi-yaaaah!
CONNIE DIVE BOMBS EUGENE, and the two fight on the floor. CONNIE uppercuts EUGENE, knocking out SEVERAL TEETH (bicuspids), and he falls to the FLOOR.
JACK: Whit! Whit! Tell them to stop!
WHIT: (pounding on the floor, counting) One, two, three, four -- What?
JACK: Oh, Whit.
WHIT: Don't you, "Oh, Whit," me!
WHIT DIVE BOMBS JACK, and a similar fight ensues, until CRAZED LAUGHING is heard, and SPOOKY MUSIC plays.
WHIT: Oh, no!
EUGENE: Could it be?
CONNIE: It is!
JACK: Regis Blackgaard!
BLACKGAARD: (as a virus) Dr. Blackgaard, Mr. Allen.
JACK: Dr. Blackgaard!
BLACKGAARD: Dr. Regis Blackgaard, Mr. Allen.
JACK: Dr. Regis Blackgaard!
BLACKGAARD: Dr. Regis Blackgaard Sir, Mr. Allen.
CONNIE: Hey, emoticons!
WHIT: Blackgaard! I will confront you!
Dun, dun, DUN!
Okay, now that I've woken you up . . .
We hear a DISTINCTIVE BELL SOUND, and can infer that SOMEONE has ENTERED WHIT'S END.
WHIT: Well, that was some nap. Feels like I've been out for a month . . . Hoo, that was almost as bad as 1997 . . .
JACK: Whit! Whit! You've woken up, too?
WHIT: Of course, you . . . Sorry, Jack. I didn't mean to blow up at you.
JACK: Looks like the anger virus is still in effect.
You have thus been SUBTLY REMINDED.
WHIT: Oh, it looks like everyone else is about to wake up.
CONNIE: Wh-what happened?
WHIT: We've all mysteriously fallen asleep, for some reason.
EUGENE: This is most inexplicable.
CONNIE: And unexpected.
JACK: Well, we're awake now.
WHIT: So we are.
CONNIE: So, Whit, how'd the trial work out?
WHIT: Oh, Whit's End is being closed down.
CONNIE: Closed down?!
EUGENE: As opposed to being closed up?
WHIT: Yes, but with all the confusion, perhaps everyone will have forgotten.
ANGRY MOB: Close down! Close down! Close down! Close down!
JACK: This does not augur well.
CONNIE: It's not good, either.
WHIT: Eugene, lock the doors!
EUGENE: (voice cracking) Right away, sir!
We hear a CHINK sound. The door has LOCKED.
WHIT: That should hold them back.
. . .
CONNIE: So, where were we before we dropped with dizziness?
WHIT: I believe that you were about to tell me something very important.
EUGENE: Yes, but I am having trouble remembering what it was. Something to do with ru -- ru -- ru . . .
JACK: Ku! Ruku!
WHIT: Oh, dear.
CONNIE: Blackgaard's unleashing the Ruku virus through the dimension of lost characters?!
EUGENE: Well, it saves time if you go about setting the plot up that way . . .
WHIT: What should we do?
JACK: Actually, I think I know a course of action. You see, while I was asleep, I was having these strange dreams that --
CONNIE: Who cares?! We have a major problem here!
EUGENE: I believe that we would be wise to defer to Mr. Allen's experience, Ms. Kendall.
CONNIE: Hi-yaaaah!
CONNIE DIVE BOMBS EUGENE, and the two fight on the floor. CONNIE uppercuts EUGENE, knocking out SEVERAL TEETH (bicuspids), and he falls to the FLOOR.
JACK: Whit! Whit! Tell them to stop!
WHIT: (pounding on the floor, counting) One, two, three, four -- What?
JACK: Oh, Whit.
WHIT: Don't you, "Oh, Whit," me!
WHIT DIVE BOMBS JACK, and a similar fight ensues, until CRAZED LAUGHING is heard, and SPOOKY MUSIC plays.
WHIT: Oh, no!
EUGENE: Could it be?
CONNIE: It is!
JACK: Regis Blackgaard!
BLACKGAARD: (as a virus) Dr. Blackgaard, Mr. Allen.
JACK: Dr. Blackgaard!
BLACKGAARD: Dr. Regis Blackgaard, Mr. Allen.
JACK: Dr. Regis Blackgaard!
BLACKGAARD: Dr. Regis Blackgaard Sir, Mr. Allen.
CONNIE: Hey, emoticons!
WHIT: Blackgaard! I will confront you!
Dun, dun, DUN!
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This Had to be the Best PartWaluigi Freak 99 wrote:WHIT climbs into the station and it starts up with an AWESOME, COOL, HAWKING-ME-ROYAL POWER UP SOUND EFFECT. Suddenly, WHIT BANGS on the metal door.
WHIT: Connie, turn it off!
CONNIE: What?
WHIT: I said, "Turn it off!"
CONNIE: What?
WHIT: Turn the Imagination Station OFF!
CONNIE: But it's only been a few seconds!
WHIT: I don't care!
CONNIE: What?
WHIT: I said "I don't care!" Something is horribly wrong!
CONNIE: What?
WHIT: Something is horribly wrong!
CONNIE: Something is horribly wrong?!
WHIT: Yes, it's -- hey, emoticons!
CONNIE: Do you want me to turn the station off?
WHIT: Yes, it could be dangerous if I stay in here too long!
CONNIE: What?
WHIT: I said, "It could be --" . . . never mind! Just turn it off!
CONNIE: Okay, I'm going to press the button.
There is a full fifteen second delay. The station then SLOWLY powers down and WHIT steps out.
CONNIE: Are you okay, Whit?
WHIT: Yes, yes, I think so.
CONNIE: What happened?
WHIT: Well, the program was supposed to give the user a glimpse of the contents of the average refrigerator. They would shrink to microscopic size and explore the --
CONNIE: Wait, why did you come up with that?
WHIT: Well, people are always asking me to write a program for Wooton, so -- it doesn't matter. The thing was, I wasn't a microscopic man exploring giant food -- I was the food. I was the milk, sitting in a plastic container in the back. I was the perishable generic peanut butter, offering a source of protein, and kids kept sticking their bare hands inside my jar and eating me. I was the unhealthy Cheese Doodles, loaded with fats and sugars.
(dramatic)
I became pure nourishment!